I love metaphoric poetry! I am really trying to get away from saying what I mean in my poems. I want the reader to scratch their head and ask their selves “what does she mean?’ My earlier poetry “was so direct. This reblog uses imagery to paint the words. Words like coffin, battlefield, clothesline, diatomic, dynamite and my favorite passage, “pack my body in boxes
“This is a great read! Below is the direct link.
http://infinitendeavor.wordpress.com/2013/08/02/indigo-waves-2/
Hang me from your clothesline
Located in the backyard of your dreams
Wring me out with comments
Make me feel like I too, believe
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Sink me in your diatomic waste
Full of constrictor dynamite
Fill me with skewers of justice bombs
Make this too, your flight
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Sing to me the corporeal sea
Found in the beaches of Italy
Sadden the daylight counterpart
With dreams of night
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Contain the sun
Hidden in your living room
Pack my body into boxes
And sink it into the battlefields
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But no matter what you do-
Don’t construct love
The way a coffin
Of indigo waves