
The sky mocked him.
It smiled with red lips,
the way women smiled at men—
other men—in their finely tailored clothes
and laughed the way children laughed,
sharing in jokes
he never understood.
He belonged to a club of one.
Others saw an expansive horizon, an endless
open road,
but when he looked out from the bridge,
he saw the sky curving in on itself,
beckoning him with grey fingers
to fall into its cold center,
it was somehow inviting–
he wondered if he might find peace there.
For the ekphrastic prompt on dVerse. Paintings by artists who experienced mental illness. I chose the painting “Despair” by Edvard Munch above. This is not based on feelings I have ever had.
Be kind to yourself and others ❤
You captured the feelings very well. Especially in these:
“he saw the sky curving in on itself,
beckoning him with grey fingers”
This is not my work, I wish it were. Click the link to view more of her work 💛
Oh, it’s Merril! Totally didn’t see that. That’s what happens when I try to function early in the morning.😂
Lol, it’s ok, I wish it had been mine, it’s a beautiful poem! 😊
O, I’ve been there many times.
❤️🩹❤️❤️🩹❤️❤️🩹❤️❤️🩹
Beautiful. ❤️
Not my work but it’s a lovely poem ❤️