
Darkness melted into my pain
One eye open to the sun
And my back to the moon
The earth whispers a calm
Graze memory
Casualties roam freely in wounded pastures
~~~
Seeds grow thick
And heavy
~~~
Till tears grew branches
And wrapped themselves
Into open wounds
And breathing
~~~
Became difficult
UPDATED 5/23/2023
It’s interesting the different response (Or lack of) I got by changing the image and title. The words are the same but the image and title have changed. It leads me to assume … The link below holds a powerful image seen by many all over the world. Click on the link to view the different image. An image and title change can shift the meaning ❤
R.I.P George Floyd 5/25/2020 ❤
“… tears grew branches…” sad, beautifully expressed. 🤍🤗
Sad indeed, thank you for stopping by 🤍
🤗
Wow. This is so powerful!
It is indeed 😪😢
This poem about dying or being on the edge of death could be complimented by many different pictures and also, your beautiful words are abstract enough to become a mirror for the reader to see their own experiences.
Thank you joyindestructible, this piece is personal. I appreciate your comment and visit to my space ❤