It was his prolonged rhyme
And clock like broken hand
Yet still made time against me
Reader? HELP! What does this mean TO YOU? I wrote it but its so metaphoric I’m a bit confused.
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Not enough time to figure out life… always one step behind?? You seem to be like me. Write something and end up being confused to yourself. Lol 😝
Thanks for sharing happy New Year (:
Oh, I love it when the word muses drop something interesting like this into my lap! It sounds broken and chaotic, like a person that wants things to be different, but they can’t be–they are what they are. I think the word ‘but’ might be throwing it off? Maybe a ‘yet’? Have fun playing with it! There are some great lines of poetry WAITING to spring out of this!!
Thank you a bunch and you are right, yet sounds better, so i edited (:
My initial imagination was picturing someone whose words and feelings towards the speaker were both suspect and false. But verse-induced imagery can vary to great degrees in meanings to any reader. Have a wonderful day!