Broken

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It was his prolonged rhyme

And clock like broken hand

Yet still made time against me

 

Reader? HELP!  What does this mean TO YOU? I wrote it but its so metaphoric I’m a bit confused.

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5 comments

  1. Oh, I love it when the word muses drop something interesting like this into my lap! It sounds broken and chaotic, like a person that wants things to be different, but they can’t be–they are what they are. I think the word ‘but’ might be throwing it off? Maybe a ‘yet’? Have fun playing with it! There are some great lines of poetry WAITING to spring out of this!!

  2. My initial imagination was picturing someone whose words and feelings towards the speaker were both suspect and false. But verse-induced imagery can vary to great degrees in meanings to any reader. Have a wonderful day!

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