It was his prolonged rhyme
And clock like broken hand
Yet still made time against me
Reader? HELP! What does this mean TO YOU? I wrote it but its so metaphoric I’m a bit confused.
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It was his prolonged rhyme
And clock like broken hand
Yet still made time against me
Reader? HELP! What does this mean TO YOU? I wrote it but its so metaphoric I’m a bit confused.
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Writing it out, one blog at a time.
"There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self" - Aldous Huxley
The Poetry and Prose of Johanna Kaye Fugitt
Commentary on what interests me, reflecting my personal take on the world
Hare Krishna
reflections, romance, release
opening the mind and heart through poetry
Poetry and short stories
fiction.poetry.art.truth.humor.life
Poetry about mental health and being a general basket case.
A Discovery of Enlightening Insights, Information, Humor, Writings and Musings
Not enough time to figure out life… always one step behind?? You seem to be like me. Write something and end up being confused to yourself. Lol 😝
Thanks for sharing happy New Year (:
Oh, I love it when the word muses drop something interesting like this into my lap! It sounds broken and chaotic, like a person that wants things to be different, but they can’t be–they are what they are. I think the word ‘but’ might be throwing it off? Maybe a ‘yet’? Have fun playing with it! There are some great lines of poetry WAITING to spring out of this!!
Thank you a bunch and you are right, yet sounds better, so i edited (:
My initial imagination was picturing someone whose words and feelings towards the speaker were both suspect and false. But verse-induced imagery can vary to great degrees in meanings to any reader. Have a wonderful day!