Sharpened words
And tails spin a web
That can never be untangled
An unspoken lie
Drowning
In
Lust
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HE SEEN ME BROKEN
HE SEE’S ME AS BEAUTIFUL
NO COMPROMISING
THE FLOWER IS MY CENTER AND THE PERSON ON THE ROC
WELL, THATS ME (:
SOME TIMES PROTECTING ME GETS A LITTLE CHALLENGING
WITH SO MANY PEOPLE PUSHING TO GET THEIR NEEDS MET
EVEN AT YOUR EXPENSE.
I ENCOURAGE YOU TO PROTECT YOUR CENTER (HEART) THERE
WILL BE TIMES YOU FALL SHORT BUT LEARN FROM THOSE VERY
TIMES.
SMILE AND KEEP IT MOVING AND REMEMBER…
NEVER GIVE UP ON LOVE EVEN WHEN IT HAS DEALT YOU A BAD HAND!
YOU ARE RESPONSIBLE FOR WHAT YOU BELIEVE EVEN IF YOU BELIEVE IT.
You don’t have to be a writer to write well.
Informative!
- Make sure you don’t accidentally replicate any any words.
- Use the right punctuation?
- Proofread yrou sentences.
- Don’t use excessive commas, otherwise, as expected, your piece, unfortunately, won’t be as effective.
- Don’t make a sentence longer than it should be, because this will make the reader question where you’re going with the topic of the sentence, and this would be detrimental to the point of the piece, so be careful and heed this point.
- Allow your own voice to shine through in your work. Enough said.
- Write with conviction. If you believe in what you write, chances are that the reader will believe in it too.
- Try or attempt not to use or write additional or extra words where you could have said or stated it much more simply.
- Don’t drift from one tense to another, otherwise the reader was confused.
- Enjoy the creativity process!
I will never again
Allow myself to feel
The pain
Of being
Out of love
I won’t die
Ever again
Such a painful death
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