I dreamt…
I dreamt some years ago
About a baby being washed out to sea
When I awoke
Instantly
I knew
That little baby girl was me
TO BE CONTINUED….
POETRY RANDOM THOUGHTS AND STUFF LIKE THAT…
I dreamt…
I dreamt some years ago
About a baby being washed out to sea
When I awoke
Instantly
I knew
That little baby girl was me
TO BE CONTINUED….
Silvana und Ulf auf Weltreise
mobile home living and lifestyle
all the trinkets of the day
One Poem Per Day
Daring to Dream: Short stories, poetry & songs. Next target: 300 Followers.
Vibe alone for a while
A place to show my work
Short stories
By Tracey L. Bhattarai
The daily adventures and mental meanderings of a teacher, writer, mother, and life long learner
Small wins for the discreetly radical environmentalist, in French and English
open mind art ;)
author of speculative fiction
Welcome to my mind. Watch the first step, it's a doozy.
Gratitude, Ask & Believe
Now I’m curious…your work is done! 🙂
LOL, I HAD A BRAIN FART SO I POSTED IT ANYWAY FOR THE MOTIVATION. YOUR CURIOSITY MAKES ME WORK HARDER. I SHOULD HAVE A FINISHED PIECE IN A FEW DAYS, PLEASE COME AGAIN.
Now that’s teasing! But are you sure you awoke though 🙂
LOL, YEA RIGHT, THERE IS STILL A CRYING BABY IN ME SCREAMING, MA-MA (; AND MORE THAN THAT WHERE THE HELL IS DADDY…
LoL… I do not have any idea, do I…
IS YOU MY BABY DADDY,,,,LOL, I COULDN’T RESIST SAYING THAT (:
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I gotta admit makes me want to attempt at finishing it myself. Its a good piece thus far 😉
THANK YOU (:
IF YOU DO FINISH I WOULDNT BE MAD ATCHA, I CANNOT FIND THE WORDS NOR WILL I TRY…I AM INTERESTED IN WHAT YOU COULD MAKE OUT OF A BEGINNING LIKE THIS. I CHALLENGE YOU…(; GOOD LUCK…
Will do. i will try to finish what ive toyed with thus far. Thank you for permission. I felt awkward suggesting. Maybe I can email it or post what i have and then go from there… either way. You’re an amazing writer.
I understand, i read stuff all the time i’d like to add a few things too. Thank you for the gentle nudge, please dont feel awkward. I am excited for this piece. I know it is gonna be good (: Please keep me informed latoyaharris98@yahoo.com
I’m liking where this is going. I have a couple of trilogy poems and may have inadvertaly started a new one. I look forward to the next instalment.
THANKS DARREN I’M NOT SURE WHERE THIS IS GOING BUT I’M SURE IT WILL BE ADVENTUROUS (:
Glad to hear it!
i think it’s fine the way it is – i’m sending it off to the twitterverse now 😉
AWEEE THANK YOU, MEANS A LOT ESPECIALLY FROM YOU…THANK YOU FOR YOUR COMMENT. YOU HAVE MASTERED SIMPLICITY, YOUR PIECES ARE ALWAYS BEAUTIFUL AND MINDBENDING MINUS THE CHATTER. YOU KNOW I CAN GO ON, AND ON, AND ON (: ME NOT BEING ABLE TO FIND THE WORDS TO COMPLETE THIS AND YOUR COMMENT HAS BEEN CONFRIMATION THAT THIS PIECE IS DONE.
THANK YOU MR. MATTHEW
CONFIRMATION (;
i always enjoy reading your work – keep on being yourself ms harris 😉