“I would love if my blogger family will reach out to someone new…or someone old a blogging friend you admire…and ask them to do a poetic duet with you. On April 25th I will showcase all the duets you ping back here to this post”. Here is her link to the challenge http://hastywords.wordpress.com/2013/04/14/help-me-celebrate/
The above is Hasty’s request for her one year anniversary in blogging and
I was more than happy to meet the challenge
This is my 2nd duet done with the very misunderstood http://morbidinsanity02.wordpress.com/2012/12/03/nonsense/
https://soundcloud.com/mentalnotes-1/misunderstood-by-morbid
Darkness engulfs my ancient soul
Pharaoh overtakes me and bleeds my heart cold
Snipping at me with invisible shears
All made of bitter tears
Nights and days I scream and cry
But no one hears…
Nobody asks why
Nobody sees…
My insignificants
That breeds magnificent
How did I get on the wrong side of this voyage?
I try to explore this
The tears that I cry
Nobody sees them sprout out of me!
All I have suffered until today have made me this that I am!
I look for transparency
But all I encounter is my own insanity
A lack of humanity
Even I misunderstand me
I wish I could have someone to weep with me my immense grief
Making me stop floating in fear
Oh I wish I could cry this I feel inside!
But I can’t get out of this dark valley I hide
I wish I could have someone to weep with me my immense grief
Making me stop floating in fear
But all I have is…
I
Only
I
With my huge pain
The pain that have made me this that I am
Oh I wish I could cry all this I feel inside!
But I can’t get out of this dark valley that I hide
mentalnotes1 
AWSOME!!!!!!
It’s such an honor and a privilege compose this duet with you. Thanks for that!
NO THANK YOU! (:
I LOVE THIS POEM!!! HASTY WANTS TO DO A POEM WITH US! WE HAVE TO DO IT!!!
Wow! Nice!!!
Wow you guys rock!!!! I need to do a duet with you two sometime soon ASAP….email me hastymrs@cox.net lol…I mean seriously.
YES!!! I LOVVVVVV HER SHE SEEMS TO THINK SHE IS MEDIOCRE OR MAYBE SHE IS JUST MODEST BUT SHE IS VERY TALENTED!!!
You both are!!!
I WILL EMAIL YOU IN THE EARLY AFTERNOON, I AGREED TO WORK 11-7 FOR A COWORKER AND MY BRAIN IS MUSH! BUT WE MUST, MUST, MUST WRITE!!
I seriously can’t wait
Another masterpiece. Lovely duet you two got here.
Thank you dear (:
Darkness and the night, valleys, such a connected duet piece to the human conditions… Top write!
THANK YOU DEAR I JUST POSTED OUR DUET AND THANK YOU FOR PUTTING UP WITH MY DIVAISM,,,LOL, GOTTA GET SOME REST NOW.
Cheers, Toya… All good on that count, I didn’t think the 2am part I wrote was going to work, being that I was half asleep at the time. Enjoy your sleep.