Adrenaline whizzed through my veins
And I tried hard to maintain
Some sort of dignity
I had the opportunity to bow out gracefully
But I stayed
My reactions were delayed
And every personality that lived in me
Felt betrayed
Because he lied
Every minute felt like an eternity
I felt the burn in me
Ready to ignite
Every nerve in me was ready for this fight
And I knew I had no business going there
I sped to his house
At a 100 mile per hour zoom
I tore up everything
I went room to room
This was distasteful
I was mean and I was hateful
And it sickened me
This infliction in me
That consumed every entrance in me
But I was already possessed
So I prayed for relief
Because this feeling was way too deep
I was not a rah-rah girl
Just a woman who had been lied to
Well composed! What a sense of being right inside the feelings and emotions while reading…
Thank you sean, I was pulling strings with this peice because it had been a few days sinse I had written, so I guess it turned out ok if you commented (: I value your comments, thanks (:
Yours always turn out good, even when dark (:
I AM FINDING THAT I GO THROUGH STAGES, I AM IN THE GLOOMY STAGE OF WRITING NOW, BUT DARKER IS MY FIRST LOVE IT MAKES FOR AN INTERESTING READ (:
Powerful!
THANK YOU FRIEND ( :