https://soundcloud.com/mentalnotes-1/INSOMNIA -poetry
Finger tips and microchips dissect my random thoughts
While movies play obsessively of all that daddy taught
I’m here once a week tryn’a get the bugs out my head
But the only thing this quack does is prescribe another fuckin med
Bugaboos and daja vu’s taunt my twisted brain
Perplexing me and vexing me
Take me out these fuckin chains
I shift my body loosely tryn’a pull back on the reins
But these voices keep whispering to me
Saying
VOICES: You know you’re fucking insane
Clouds of shame
Socially stained
Fully engulfed in this cryptic game
I can’t escape these aweful memories
So I try and write away the pain
I lay there blamelessly
As he dissects my twisted mind
ME: Yea I know
As he looks ahead and says
DOCTOR: Were out of fucking time
Finger tips and microchips dissect my twisted thoughts
While tapes play obsessively of all that daddy taught
Finger tips and microchips dissect my twisted thoughts
While tapes play obsessively of all that daddy taught
Finger tips and microchips dissect my twisted thoughts
While tapes play obsessively of all that daddy taught
Finger tips and microchips dissect my twisted thoughts
While tapes play obsessively of all that daddy taught
Finger tips and microchips dissect my twisted thoughts
While tapes play obsessively of all that daddy taught
Finger tips and microchips dissect my twisted thoughts
While tapes play obsessively of all that daddy taught
Finger tips and microchips dissect my twisted thoughts
While tapes play obsessively of all that daddy taught
Finger tips and microchips dissect my twisted thoughts
While tapes play obsessively of all that daddy taught
While tapes play obsessively of all that daddy taught
While tapes play obsessively of all that daddy taught
While tapes play obsessively of all that daddy taught
While tapes play obsessively of all that daddy taught
While tapes play obsessively of all that daddy taught
While tapes play obsessively of all that daddy taught
While tapes play obsessively of all that daddy taught
ME: Yea I know
DOCTOR: Were out of fucking time
mentalnotes1 
May you travel light, and explore fresh worlds… words and places..
THANK YOU SEAN, I SHOT YOU AN EMAIL.
Latoya, email didn’t make it, do you know where it went?
Yes, I got a email from someone else…lol I will send it again when I get home (:
Wow, POTENT stuff, woman. Thanks for following me, or I would not have found this!
THANKS A BUNCH SUSAN (:
Wow, you are an amazing writer! So inspired!
THANK YOU THAT IS SUCH A GREAT COMPLIMENT.
Brilliantly written. The torture of thoughts running through our minds is indeed hard to shut off. This poem captures it completely. The empathetic part of me prays you will find help and comfort and acceptance in faith in God. He is loving and compassionate beyond measure. Thanks for stopping by my blog and the follow.
Thank you, although I dont really see a doctor,,lol and sleep really well at night. I love to write about all sorts of different things and on the night I wrote this “WORDS” kept me up. Thus came this poem “INSOMNIA”
Glad to hear you are ok! You write so convincingly that I was concerned you were struggling and reaching out for help and just wanted to offer support and concern. God Bless and have an awesome day!
I’M ALWAYS REACHING OUT FOR HELP BUT I AM OK (: THANKS YOU FOR THE GENUINE CONCERN I’M A PRETTY WELL PUT TOGETHER WOMAN. WITH MINOR MENTAL ISSUES ,,,LOL
Yikes. Pretty scary. k.
FINGERTIPS AND MICROCHIP (:
Now that a concept right there… Loved this. Beyond words. Thank you for being original, this just blew my mind way over here haha! Peace…
THANK YOU I’M GLAD YOU LIKE IT, IT’S A STRANGE ONE (:
wow, having battled with insomnia for years this one hit me, you managed to pinpoint a random beat of my heart if that even makes sense to you.
RANDOM BEAT OF THE HEART, THE ONE WE HEAR WHILE THE NIGHT IS STILL AND OUR EYES LIDS ARE BEING PULLED UP BY SOME INVISABELE GARGOIL,,,LOL,,,,HMM, NOT SURE IF THAT IS FUNNY. THANKS FOR THE COMMENT (:
gargoil, I like that. you have great poems, glad I got here.
YOU ARE WELCOME BACK ANYTIME (: AND THANKS
I really admire your style – it reminds me of the spoken word poets that first got me into writing. The audio of your pieces really enhances the work. Thanks for finding me!
YUPPER, AND THANKS FOR THE VISIT, PLEASE DO COME AGAIN.
Hey there, very striking words and images on your blog! Also, thanks for following my blog. I hope you like what you read in the future 🙂
THANK YOU MICHELLE AND I LOOK FORWARD TO IT (:
🙂
Bugaboos and daja vu’s, that’s great, really good piece
I THOUGHT THAT WAS THE PERFECT PIC FOR THIS POEM (:
haha fantastic piece and as an occasional insomniac – very comforting because it made me laugh out loud. Thank You! 🙂
Excellent work, haunting.
Thank you love (:
Thanks for visiting me, I have crazy insomnia at the moment so I GET this. Best chica 😉
This speaks volumes to me. Thanks for following me. I am now following you.
manic insomniac repeating himself while having insomnia – gosh damnit I have to sleep – trawling through your works doesn’t help with that 😉 *thumbs up*
-HOW DO YOU THINK I FEEL, I’M UP ALL NIGHT LONG WITH ME AND THESE DANG WORDS,,,LOL, THANKS FOR COMMENTING.
Awesome. I really like your writing style.
THANK YOU, IT FEELS GOOD TO BE APPRECIATED (:
Yes, I appreciate it very much. A masterful use of language and emotion intertwined in several I have read tonight in this blog…I think it is great.
AND I THINK YOU ARE AWSOME AND BRAVE FOR VISITING THIS CRAZY PLACE,,,,LOL
Lol…it can get crazy in here at times too…probably more so in the past but at times still