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I didn’t mean to give myself to another
He startled me as I turned around.
I heard his manly sound
It was him
I was caught off guard when he said
What the fuck is this!
I told my husband it was only a kiss
I stood there in the rain as the gel from my curl set ran down my temple
I love you
I said, and again, he said
What the fuck is this!!
I, I, I, as I stuttered to try and find the words
My mistress stood there pleading with her eyes for me to acknowledge her
She wanted me to say, this is the woman I’ve been seeing every day
But I stood there
Blank
As I watched my husband’s heart sink into the earth with the rain
I wanted to reverse this pain
He said again with much more authority
WHAT THE FUCK IS THIS!!!!
If it was only a kiss why is she crying
I stood there
Trapped
But if I walked away now I knew I’d miss her
We all just stood there
In the rain
Blank
As I thought
What the fuck is this!
mentalnotes1 
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O WOW, THANKS!! MY WRITING IS THE ONLY THING I AM CONFIDENT ABOUT, IM SO GLAD ITS ACKNOWLEGED AND APPRECIATED 🙂
you’re welcome! 🙂 I admire the fact that you expose what you write. keep doing it!
this is so raw, so real. awesome
OH WOW, THANKS AND SINSE I GOTCHA HERE, HERE IS THE LINK I MENTIONED YOU AT FOR THE PROLIFIC BLOGGER AWARD CHALLENGE https://mentalnotes1.wordpress.com/2012/11/09/the-challengethanks-httpsagedoyle-wordpress-com/
splendid wordplay. Twists like substituting.
THANK YOU REVERENDHELLFIRE 🙂
Girl you have a very nice way with words and conveying a story. I dig this! 🙂
Thanks sis (:
Pretty words don’t make dull stuff interesting.
But energy fizzes from this – love it 🙂
THANK YOU 😊
😊
This poem has more reality than most I have read. I love the clash of decisions and the turning of “What the fuck is this.”
p.s. Thanks for the follow. You write very well. Follow returned.
AWWWEEE, THANK YOU darkanddreary, THIS WAS A TRUE STORY, MY FRIEND WAS MORE MESSED UP ABOUT HER ROLLERSET THAN BEING COUGHT BY HER HUSBAND,,,(LONGSIGH) THANKS FOR THE FOLLOW
First off, thank you for following my blog. Secondly, you are a great writer. I felt like I was witnessing this aching, beautiful and slightly dangerous drama unfold. Great post!
I had to write about my besties delema,I’d bea fool not to write about it 😊
I like this one.
Me too (: thank you!
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Love it…lol WTF is this!!!!
Nice 🙂 say it llike it is 🙂
THATS WHAT I DO! (:
Okay, calm down
Haaaa, funnny!
Thanks, its sad I don’t get paid for making people laugh 🙂
RIGHT LOL! YOU WOULD PROBABLY BE VERY WEALTHY (:
Thank you assuming that isn’t sarcastic… hit me on my email address: ngeshlew@live.co.uk that is if you don’t mind
I’m sick, I’m going to bed for cosy snooze . . . call me when it’s time, I’ll hear.
RR
Gitcha some rest hun (:
I read some of your poems again. Damned good work.
RR
THANK YOU SOSOSOSO MUCH! (:
hi dear,, thanks for the follow. I really appreciate.. and about this post.. hmmm.. since its a true story how the fuck did your friend settled with the “what the fuck is this” of a man.. well it really felt like I was there when it happened,, GREAT POST FRIEND….
OK, WHAT WOULD YOU HAVE DONE IN THIS SITUATION? AS A MAN. HMMM, LET ME GUESS, YOU WOULD HAVE INVITED HER AND YOUR WIFE FOR A COCKTAIL,,,LOL
haha…cocktail is the least thing they will get. I would be like “explain yourself woman”
WHAT THE FUCK IS THIS!!!!!!??
don’t know whether I’d laugh or cry, but I bet I would never forget the scene until the day I did die!
Mr. Walters you are funny 🙂
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Powerful, emotive and evocative, really packs a punch.
Yes it does, cheating is cheating no matter the gender. Thanks for visiting again 😊
My pleasure 🙂