Why give me this body that imprisons my soul?
I Rome this bruised space hiding from my own disgrace
That spills over in my world
That only knows me as a little girl
But I am a woman!
And I know because I have the scars to prove it
I have tits and ass like an hour glass
And puberty has been years passed
But I am still a little girl
And my avatar wants to leave because I won’t let her breathe
Smothering her with my fears of
And most of all yesterday
But she stays to play anyway
Can’t stand her because
She is protected
By her avatar
This is a powerful one
YEA, AVATAR IS ONE LONG CRAZY POESTORY WITH SUBLIMES AND METAPHORS BUT IT WAS TOO LONG SO I BROKE IT DOWN IN 6 PARTS, THANKS GLAD YOU LIKED IT, IT GETS DEEPER
wow! this is mad deep.
My avatar is the little girl in me who protects me from this cruel world *** WE ALL HAVE ONE, AN AVATAR (:
Bravo!!! I agree. This is a very powerful piece. We are all still girls, but grown ~ filled with our insecurities.
THX PAMMY WE ARE ALL A WORK IN PROGRESS (:
hej, thanks for the follow, i am glad to returne the favore.
I really like your poetry, the direct and immediate way you tell stories…
looking forward to more.
wish you a nice day!
Thanks, and you enjoy this beautiful day also (:
Reblogged this on David Emeron: Reflections upon Reflections and commented:
Thank you very much for visiting my very very tame and quiet little corner of cyberspace, when compared to yours. One thing confuses me in the above entry; however, it is just a quite mild curiosity. I’m not sure I see anything in your avatar that seems objectionable or that I might shy away from or wish you to remove. Apart from that, I believe I understand the tenor of above entry. Thanks again for the visit.
Thanks David (:
WHEN YOU WRITE THE ABOVE ENTRY BEING http://sagedoyle.wordpress.com/2012/11/29/the-journal-of-wall-grimm-38-grimms-fate-melody/ SHE WROTE MY AVATAR INTO HER CHARACTER WALL GRIMM UPON MY REQUEST. IT IS A VERY INTRIGUING JOURNAL ABOUT A REALLY WEIRD BUT INTERESTING GUY NAMED GRIMM. IT IS A MUST READ!
Aahhh! Oh, how we master the crafted talent of creating our own persona for adaptation to life’s trials and tribulations. When we need to pursue that which we naturally wouldn’t, we create a persona that definitely can, because it is that persona that can handle those particular repercussions. That is a deep perspective on life, good one.